Showing posts with label The Second Sister. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Second Sister. Show all posts

Thursday, March 31, 2011

Long Absence

Hello everyone! First of all, I would like to apologize for not posting for several months. I have indeed been busy, and one of the things I have been busy with is this...

Yes – I recently signed a contract with L-book to publish The Second Sister in both E-book, paperback, and audiobook format. I’m so incredibly excited!!!

As of now, it’s a 5-year contract, and hopefully they will be interested in the three other books in the Amendyr series as well. A redirect/link will be posted on this website as soon as the book comes out.

I want to thank all of you for your support throughout my writing career. Getting e-mails in my inbox is the highlight of my day, and they always make me smile. I try to respond to most of them and all of the comments you guys leave. I also want to thank Lee, my awesome Beta reader, and my Mistress, who has encouraged (read: tolerated) my writing from the very beginning even though it drives her slightly insane.


Item of business one: OMG!!!!! *spaz* I am so excited!

Item of business two: new website - http://raedmagdon.com

Item of business three: Should I continue to run this site (with much more frequent updates) as a separate entity or combine it with my new website? Tell me in comments.

Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Hello, everyone! Christmas break is over, and I am feeling much better now that my wisdom teeth are taken care of. (Yes, that's a hint to my embarrassingly young age, but at least I am several years older than the 18 years technically required to be able to read the smut I write)... Oh well, moving on. Four items of business today.


First of all, I should be hearing from L-book.com soon about The Second Sister. If they think it isn't right for their publishing house, I'll be disappointed, but I'll certainly keep looking for a home because that book is good, and it deserves to be shared.


Second item of business is this: Thank you to Brooke R. Busse. Check out the award lists she included me on!


Number three - I usually don't plead for reviews, but the third book in my Amendyr series got lost in a big glut of story releases on a wonderful site called The Athenaeum. If you all could go leave a review here on The Witch's Daughter (if you've read/will read it), that would make me feel all kinds of warm fuzzies! I don't usually ask for reviews, but on this particular site, more reviews means more people will see the recommendations on the updates page and maybe check it out.


Number four is slightly longer and different. Yes, I'm giving you a grammar lesson...

I've noticed a disturbing trend in Alex/Olivia fanfiction lately. No, it's not the torturotica. I just avoid that. No, it's not the lack of spanking stories. I cry about that at night, but I get over it because I know it's not everyone's kink. It is, in fact, the incorrect use of capitalization in dialogue after a comma!

Now, two of the BEST A/O fanfic writers I have ever encountered make this mistake, so if you do as well, don't fret. You're in good company. But technically, when you add dialogue to the end of a sentence, you should NOT capitalize the first letter of the clause. For example, let's examine this sentence.

To the surprise of both women, Christine actually grinned. “Hey, I know the effect of those glasses, Agent Hart,” she said, giving Tess’s reflection an appraising look, “They only add to her sex appeal.”


Do you spot the problem? Yes, the T in They should not be capitalized. When you are connecting two pieces or dialogue or adding a dialogue tag at the end of a sentence, you do NOT want to capitalize the first letter. Here are two other corrections for that sentence.

To the surprise of both women, Christine actually grinned. “Hey, I know the effect of those glasses, Agent Hart,” she said, giving Tess’s reflection an appraising look. “They only add to her sex appeal.”


Here, I used a period to separate the last piece of dialogue. Because I ended the sentence, I can now start the dialogue tag with a capital letter.

To the surprise of both women, Christine actually grinned. “Hey, I know the effect of those glasses, Agent Hart,” she said, giving Tess’s reflection an appraising look, “they only add to her sex appeal.”


I kept the comma this time, but used a lower case 't' in they. This sentence is also correct.

(Just for those who are curious, option 1 is the original sentence from my latest novel. I purposely wrote it incorrectly to demonstrate the problem, and the second correction, even though it is not actually used, is a perfectly acceptable option).

Thursday, December 16, 2010

Back on the Horse

Well, it's been a while, eh?

Here are some things you should know:

1. I won NaNoWriMo!
2. No, I'm not ready to post it yet. The novel isn't done even though I hit 50K.
3. I am getting surgery soon so I will probably be grumpy.
4. I finished The Witch's Daughter! Congratulations to me.
5. I'm submitting The Second Sister to L-book.com

Wait, backtrack. WHAT?

Yes, it is time for me to get back on the horse. I decided to give it another go and submit my baby, the first full-length novel I ever completed, to a publishing house that I very much respect. I have purchased stories from L-book in the past and was very pleased with the content. Although I was originally leaning towards print media, since most of my fans are online anyway, I think this might be an even better option! I am sure they would give my story a good home and hope that they like what they see.

I would like to thank all of you for your continuing support and all the lovely feedback and e-mails I get. I save them all and read them when I feel depressed, and it just really brightens my life. You guys all rock so hard!

It's back into the big, bad, scary world of publishing for me.

By the way, in the event that L-book doesn't think The Second Sister is right for them (I really hope they do!), I might need some other good ideas for publishing houses. I am NOT giving up until I get this baby in print one way or the other. It's a damn good story and it's worth putting out there for people to read! It took me a while to overcome my shyness, but Rae is back, baby, and she really wants to make a go of this whole novelist thing.

By the way, here's the Bio I sent them, just in case you were curious:

********* **********, writing under the pen name Rae D. Magdon, is a music student at the *** ***** ****** ** ***** in ********, **, working towards her undergraduate degree in Flute Performance. During the past two years, she has chosen to share her writing on such websites as The Academy of Bards and The Athenaeum, where she has received recognition and several awards for her first novel, The Second Sister. Its two sequels, Wolf’s Eyes and The Witch’s Daughter, were also well received upon completion, and the last book in the series, Mirror, Mirror, is outlined and half-completed. She has also written several non-fantasy novels, including Chopin at 3:00 in the Morning, a modern-day romance; Death Wears Yellow Garters, a light, “tea-cozy” lesbian murder mystery; and My Name Is Brianna, a young-adult novel about the struggles of a MTF transsexual and her lesbian sister. In her spare time, she enjoys dabbling in Alex Cabot/Olivia Benson Law and Order fanfiction, spending quality time with her girlfriend of six years, and hiding from her best friend’s purebred Flatcoats so that they do not eat her.

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

To-Do List

Just in case you were interested, here is my writing To Do List. I'm mostly posting it here for my benefit, but perhaps some of you will find it interesting. In no fixed order (although priorities are generally near the top)...


Fanfiction:
- Last chapter of 'Magnetic Resistance' (Law and Order: SVU)
- Finish 'It Happened One Night' (Law and Order: SVU)
- Finish 'Exhibitionist' (Law and Order: SVU)
- Start sequel to 'Magnetic Resistance' (Law and Order: SVU)

///// Half-started ideas /////
- Twilight: The Descent Into Madness (Legally Blonde/L&O:SVU/Twilight crossover)
- By Courier (Devil Wears Prada/L&O: SVU crossover)
- Unnamed Devil Wears Prada fic
- Unnamed Jane Rizzoli/Maura Isles smut (Rizzoli & Isles)
- Unnamed KIGO fic (Kim Possible/Shego... yes, I am a total dork)


Original Fiction:
- The Witch's Daughter (2 more chapters to go...)
- Senator's Daughter (needs a title!)

///// Half-Started Ideas/////
- Lilith's Redemption (new supernatural-themed original fiction novel)
- Murder, Lies, Statutory Rape, and Madison Rose (drama/romance)

///// Other Plans /////
- The two other books in the Chopin universe
- The last book in the Amendyr universe


That list probably makes very little sense to you, but it's good to have goals. Lots of goals. And NaNoWriMo is coming up, so that will be a splendid time to knock out some writing and hit some big word count numbers.

Monday, August 23, 2010

Rome Wasn't Built In A Day, Running, and Other Metaphors

Sure, there are some days where the words pour from your fingertips in a waterfall of creativity and prose, but those days are exceedingly rare. As Holly Lisle, one of my favorite writers (especially when she writes about writing), says in one of her helpful articles: novelists are the long-distance runners of the writing world. Unlike sprinters or milers, long distance runners have to have a lot of endurance. Speed isn't necessarily the most important skill. It's all about pacing yourself. It doesn't matter how fast you go, only that you reach the finish line.

Every writer works at their own speed. My personal writing speed is completely erratic. Sometimes I can barely get down a couple hundred words, and other times I glance down at the word count and realize I've done five thousand in only a couple of hours. Being a fast writer is definitely nice, but not necessary. In the end, it isn't important whether you write faster than a Harlequinn romance novelist with two books out every year or spend what seems like forever on the same gigantic fantasy novel.

Right now, I am not very inspired to finish The Witch's Daughter, maybe because of the rejection from Bold Strokes, and I really want to work on my newest project, which is about an FBI agent and a closeted politician (I posted an excerpt already). However, I'm not giving up.

In order to inspire myself, I posted the first two parts on the websites I submit to for some comments and feedback. That always makes me write faster. My fanfiction is proof of that. The more reviews I get, the faster I write. If you are ever stuck on a project (make sure it is one that you really DO enjoy and want to finish), I suggest posting it half-finished instead of waiting. Although many people hate being left at a cliffhanger, myself included, it can be a personal motivator. (If you are one of those people who can NEVER seem finish a project, however, don't heed that advice and wait until you finish, or you might end up with a lot of disappointed fans.)

Dividing my attention between multiple projects also seems to be an effective way to unclog the writing tubes when I feel like I will never finish my novel. Again, this technique is not the best one to use for beginners that have trouble finishing what they start. If you fall in to this category, the only advice I can offer is to slug through the mud until you get to the finish line. There's no shortcuts, no easy way around it. You just have to finish. The more projects you complete, the easier it gets.

Being a writer is a lot harder than most people think. It requires a lot of stamina, a lot of determination, and a thick hide. But it is also very rewarding to sit and stare at a full word document that means something to you... and will, hopefully, mean something to others.

On another note, Rome cannot be built without help. Today (or tomorrow, since it's late tonight), take the time to thank all the wonderful people in your life that read your work and help you while you're running the novel race. It will make both of you feel good, and maybe it will also garner you some extra support and inspiration.

Tuesday, August 17, 2010

New Project

Well, never let it be said that Rae gives up without a fight. Since Bold Strokes does want to see more of my work (and they were actually very encouraging in their letter to me, which was personalized and not just a form letter), I am starting a new project. I'm not sure what title I will give it, but here's the gist and an excerpt.

Plot: Tess Daubney, the daughter of a prominent senator, is running on the Republican ticket in her first national election for one of Ohio's Congressional seats (2nd district). However, she has to make a choice when she gets entangled with Robin, the niece of her campaign manager. It's kind of ironic that, in this story, the Republican is the good guy and the Democrat is a total sleezebag. I usually vote Democrat (although I greatly admire Olympia Snowe), but I tend to judge individual politicians based on their moral fiber and their experience rather than their party.


Her legs still shaking, weak from what they had just done, Tess bent down to pick up Robin’s discarded clothes. Her jeans and underwear were slumped in a pile against one wall, and her shirt was on the other side of the room. The sleeve of her brown leather jacket peeked out from beneath the desk, but Tess was too distracted to notice it.

“Don’t do that yet,” Robin murmured, getting up from the chair and wandering over to wrap the smaller woman in her arms. She looked confused and a little hurt when Tess flinched, jerking out of the embrace. Looking uncomfortable, the blonde adjusted her skirt and began rebuttoning her blouse. She would have to find her bra and stockings later. They had to be somewhere underneath the furniture. “Tess, what ar-”

Tess shook her head, taking another step back to put more distance between them. She shoved the clothes into Robin’s outstretched arms, trying not to watch as the naked woman began to dress herself. “Love is for story books, Robin, not real people. I have a chance to do something great here, something bigger than just me or you... I – I can’t throw that away.”

“You’ve got to be kidding me.” Robin’s wounded expression urged Tess to take back what she had said, to change her mind. It took every ounce of strength that the blonde possessed to turn her chair around and face the wall. She couldn’t do this if she had to look at Robin’s haunted brown eyes.

“I think you should leave,” she said. Her voice wavered, cracking slightly, but Robin was too angry to notice.

“I guess now that you got what you wanted, you’re done with me,” Robin said, the disgust in her voice piercing the blonde’s heart.

All of the color drained from Tess’s face. “You have to understand, my job–”

“Oh, I understand perfectly. You’re throwing away something wonderful, something I’ve never felt before, without even giving it a chance... just because you’re a coward.” Not caring about the messy state of her hair, she finished pulling her shirt over her head and reached under the desk for her jacket, almost forgetting to button and zip her jeans. They felt stiff and uncomfortable against her legs. She should have been holding Tess right now, savoring her warm skin, soaking in the afterglow... not running off into the night like a high school kid sneaking through their girlfriend’s bedroom window. Obviously, what they had done meant nothing to her. She rubbed at stinging eyes with the back of her hand, glad that she and Tess had their backs to each other so that the other woman couldn’t see her fighting back tears.

“Robin...”

For a moment, both women forgot to breathe.

“I’m sorry things aren’t... different.”

She expected another argument, shouting, curses, something – but Robin did not try and convince her to turn her chair back around. She did not speak at all. She simply stood in silence, numbing herself against the sting of Tess’s rejection.

Staring at the drawn window shades because she could not bear to watch Robin leave, she listened to the quiet click of the door and the melancholy sound of retreating footsteps. Words rose in her throat, words calling the younger woman back, but she clenched her teeth and swallowed them back down. Hadn’t Robin already taken enough of her soul?

When she was sure that she was alone again, Tess finally let her defenses fall, collapsing onto the desk and burying her face in her arms, crying into the sleeves of her crookedly buttoned blouse.



Anyway, I'm still going to try to get TSS published. It's a damn good novel, and I'll find a way to get it out there somehow. I'm not sure what route I will take yet, but there are other publishing companies out there. However, I'd still like to publish something with Bold Strokes someday. They're a great publishing house, and I'm not at all offended by their rejection. From the tone of the letter, I gather that they just don't have room for fantasy right now in their next set of releases. If you've got ideas, tell me what you think!

Saturday, August 14, 2010

Bold Strokes Responded...

Well, Bold Strokes responded. It's half good news, half bad news. I received a personalized e-mail that said, basically: Your writing is good and your voice distinctive, but we are simply not looking to publish fantasy books at this time. We are interested in seeing some of your other work.

Right now, I am not sure what to do. My other works are, well...


Death Wears Yellow Garters is too zany and not nearly polished enough to be published.

Chopin at 3:00 in the Morning is far too "high school"...

My Name is Brianna is too short.


Everything else that I have written is for the fantasy genre... I am dealing with a storm of emotions right now, and I will not sure what decisions I will make in the future or what I will do next, but I do know one thing. I am not giving up. TSS is a damn good book, and I'm proud of it, and I'm sure that, eventually, it will find a home, whether it's with Bold Strokes or not. Even if I have to tear it apart and redo it completely... even if I have to focus on some non-fantasy for now because that's what publishers want... no matter what I end up doing, I'm getting that damn book published if it's the last thing I do. I'm not sure when or how, but it's going to happen.

In other news, I only have 10,000 words left to go on The Witch's Daughter. The first two parts are up on The Academy and The Athenaeum (or will be, shortly). Oh, and on fictionpress, but those parts still have some editing mistakes.

Sunday, August 8, 2010

The Waiting Game

Now that I have returned from my vacation (it seems like I am hardly at home this summer) with no traveling left to do, I have time to relax, get some serious writing done... and bite my nails down to the skin while waiting for a response from Bold Strokes about my submission. It is nerve-wracking to send something in for publication. Even while you are busy working, having fun on the beach, or preparing to start your next writing project, it lingers in the back of your mind.

It has been roughly ten weeks since I sent in The Second Sister, and boy, hitting the 'submit' button was hard. Doing it electronically was probably easier than mailing it in, however (they prefer electronic submissions anyway). At least that way, I didn't have time to change my mind. Once I double clicked on the 'Send' button, there was no going back. I admit that it took me a few minutes to gather the courage to do it. Bold Strokes did confirm that they received my submission and that they are reviewing it, so at least I don't have to worry that it got lost somewhere in cyberspace. Their website says that submitters are usually contacted 12-14 weeks after the initial inquiry, so I still have more time to wait and worry.

Still, there are no regrets on this front. Maybe I could have edited the novel more (although I did a pretty thorough job the first two times). Maybe I could have scrapped the whole thing and done it better the second time. Maybe I'm not ready to be a published author. But if I sat around waiting until I had the perfect novel to submit, I would never be able to share anything with anyone. If Rembrandt spent years agonizing over the tiny, imperfect spot in one of his first paintings, who knows, maybe the masterpieces he painted later never would have been created. If Beethoven had been too self-conscious to write his first symphony because of Mozart's lingering shadow in Vienna, the others would never have been written. Writers are always growing and changing (and hopefully improving), but there is no such thing as a 'perfect' novel, just as there is no such thing as a 'perfect' piece of music or a 'perfect' painting.

It's important to suck it up and put yourself out there over and over again - even if someone does not like your work, even if you get rejected. You have to develop a thick skin and the ability to accept criticism graciously. If you never try, you are never giving anyone a chance to say 'yes'. And someday, I hope that the 'yes' will be for me. I know it will be worth the work it took to get there.

Sunday, July 11, 2010

O Romeo, Romeo...

So, you want to add romance to your novel? Most people do. I've met a couple of writers (mostly males) who say: "but I'm writing a fantasy/sci-fi novel! I don't want to ruin it with romance!" You won't ruin it. Trust me. IF you do the romance right. In fact, if I had to classify myself as anything, I'd call myself a romance novelist. Some of my novels are epic fantasy/sci-fi adventures. I've got some smut out there, some YA novels... some courtroom drama/action/thrillers, ect. But ALL of them have romance at some point (and usually sex, either explicit or implied).


1. In order to write a good romance novel, you need strong characters. Characters are the building blocks of any novel, but they are extra important in a romance novel, because it's the interaction between the two characters that creates the tension and... release... ;D Avoid creating a standard boy-or-girl toy for your main character just so they have someone. The last thing someone wants to read about is a perfect lover. As with all characters, flaws give depth and color to a romantically involved pair.


2. Observe! Go back and reread your favorite romance novel (or any novel that has some romance in it, if you don't like pure romance). See what they author did and make a list of what you liked. If you are reading a new novel or short story that you dislike, try to figure out why and remember it. That's how good writers learn to write anything, romance or not. They read, see what works and what doesn't, and try to incorporate it into their own work.


3. Templates can be fun. As always, I advocate 'stealing' couples with a lot of chemistry and changing them around to make them your own. The Second Sister actually did not start as an Uber novel (Uber novels, for those of you who do not know, are lesbian romances placed in any time where the characters resemble the epic duo Xena and Gabrielle). I created Belle and Ellie on my own, although I changed Ellie's eye color from green to blue in order to match Gabrielle's description. Uber is great for beginners (and even those of us who are no longerbeginners), and you shouldn't feel bad for 'copying' another couple. Xena and Gabrielle are a template that was around long before the 1990s. The angsty warrior/protector and their redeeming, innocent lover is a volatile combination that has existed in literature for centuries. Besides, if you write an Uber, it's still original fiction, you can still publish it, and you get a ready-made group of fans in the Xena community! It's a good deal.

That said... Make sure your characters have enough originality so that people don't get bored. Add your own flavor, or the novel won't be worth reading. Even fanfiction writers do this. Every individual writer (and sometimes each individual universe belonging to a single writer) has a different 'flavored' version of their leading character(s).


4. Add conflict. There has to be something keeping your leading ladies (or dude(s), if you write straight/gay male romance) apart. No matter what point in the book the lovers fall in to each other's arms, there should be some looming, outside force conspiring to keep your characters from finding happiness. This can be a physical force such as a villain, or an internal force such as societal taboo (lesbianism? best friend's girl? feuding families?) or conflicting personality traits (one of your girls is afraid of commitment because of her dark past? One has other priorities like a child that require her attention?) You get the idea.


5. Decide how descriptive you want to get. Choose in advance how much of the 'action' you want to write out. In case you are very, very dense, I'm talking about sex. I can only say that deciding in advance is helpful. I also encourage writers to at least TRY to add some sex for fun, even if they "don't think they can write it". You can always fade to black and save that part in a secret file somewhere. No one else ever has to see it. But you might find that it enhances the novel. I'll make another complete post about writing sex scenes tomorrow, so this isn't the end of this subject!

Sunday, June 20, 2010

Write Wherever You Go

Hi guys, sorry I haven't been posting lately, but I am getting ready for a flute masterclass in Chicago. It is a five day long event that I am very excited to be attending, but somehow I have still found the time to work on my novel.


Some quick updates on me:

I have almost hit 50,000 words on The Witch's Daughter. Yay!

I have a fanfiction.net account now for Law and Order fanfics (and maybe some other stuff later). Look up Rae D. Magdon on www.fanfiction.net and check it out.


Now, a quick helpful post for all of you (and me) to think about...

It is always a good time to write. Well, maybe not always, but there are more available minutes in your day that you probably think. Because of this, I like to carry around a notebook (well, several notebooks that I rotate between because I am disorganized). On the rare occasions that I do not have a notebook, I usually find paper and a pen somewhere to write a few paragraphs on. They add up very quickly.

I know for sure that I will be writing at the airport today before my flight leaves, although I usually worry that someone will look over my shoulder and watch what I am doing. A lot of my first novel, The Second Sister, was penned in my high school math classes, as was the novella My Name is Brianna.

Who knows? I might even be able to jot down some quick thoughts in between note-taking blocks during my masterclass. When I'm not playing, of course!

Monday, June 7, 2010

Uh-oh...

Sometimes, the writing muse just takes over.

Perhaps 'writing demon' is a better descriptor. Every writer has been 'in the zone' at some point, where they can't eat, sleep, or think about anything but words. Oh, those all-consuming words. They struggle to come out, sometimes sluggishly, sometimes so fast that you can barely type them out.

I was struck with inspiration while writing last night. I think that I have enough material for a FOURTH novel in what was supposed to be a fantasy trilogy, and now I feel totally overwhelmed. I have gotten rid of 22,000 words, written another 30,000 (taking 10,000 of that material from an old work), and somehow formed a basic outline of my plan... I hope. I think I can use about half of the 22,000 false-start novel and about 10,000 words from my infamous archive of old junk to make 'Mirror, Mirror' come to life again.

Confused? So am I.

Here is where I need some reader input. If you have read The Second Sister, Wolf's Eyes, or the first part of The Witch's Daughter, feel free to chime in. Tell me what you think of this plan.

The third book, The Witch's Daughter, will be completed as-is, in my usual three-part, first-person format. I'm about half way done already.

The fourth book, Mirror Mirror, is going to be a hodgepodge, but it works PERFECTLY with the grand plot structure I was originally going to include in The Witch's Daughter. The first 25,000 word part will be from Ellie's point of view. The second 25,000 word part will be from Cate's point of view. The third 25,000 word part will be from Ailynn's point of view. So, like, mini versions of the first three books to wrap it all up. Cool, right? Or am I just crazy?

Do you think I could pull this off if I was careful? Do you think jumping viewpoints is too confusing for readers? I think I got it to work for 'Chopin at 3:00 in the Morning', but I never expected to try the viewpoint-swapping experiment again. I'd love to hear your thoughts on this in the comments. I'll probably have another post up later today (more about the craft of writing, less about my own confusing plotlines).

Sunday, June 6, 2010

Letting Go Of Baby

A short post today. First item of business: the first part of my novel, The Witch's Daughter, is officially finished! Er, the rough draft version, of course. I sent it off to my beta-reader, who is a sweetheart, and posted it on fictionpress. I won't send it to The Academy or The Athenaeum until it's been beta read. I know those ladies like their stuff well-looked-over first.

Second item is the actual content of this post...

You have to be able to send your story out into the world. Yes, letting go is hard to do, but it's a necessary step in the writer's journey. As close as a writer can become to the characters in their novels, a time comes when their story is done, the girls are all grown up, and it's time to let go.

It is terrifying to send your baby out to be read and judged by nameless, faceless readers, some of whom you will never meet. However, it can also be extremely exciting and rewarding. I find it spiritually satisfying to share my work, and that feeling usually overcomes the terror that accompanies the release of any written material on my part. So, if you've written something, no matter how short, let it go and share it with others so we can all enjoy your thoughts.

Third item of business. I am looking for new topics to write about! Although I have plenty of ideas, I want this blog to be about its readers, so if you have any writing topics you would like me to discuss, let me know! I'm open to suggestions. Also, thank you to those of you who have left comments! I adore you.

Love and kisses,

Rae

Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Slogging Through

To publish a novel, first you must finish it. Only Stephen King can submit a proposal for a novel before it is actually complete (and I'm sure that he outlines his books at the very least before submitting such a proposal).

Finishing a novel is much harder than starting one, and it is easy to get bogged down. Some writers hate beginnings, some writers hate endings, and some hate middles. Usually, my own novels are very strong in the beginning and end portions, but the middle is only a tenuous thread, easily breakable and usually tangled. Right now, I'm in the middle of The Witch's Daughter, and it's not the most exciting part of the book to write (although I hope that it will be exciting to read).

To motivate myself, I have spent time on the beginning and end of the novel as well, typing out pieces of the middle in between so that I don't get overwhelmed. My middles also tend to have the most sex scenes and romantic bits, because the end and beginning are usually more plot-focused. Sex scenes are a great way to distract myself from how much I hate writing middles. And boy do I hate middles!

So think of ways to spice up your middle if you find yourself stuck. Although my novels usually have sex, many novels do not, and there are plenty of other ways to keep the momentum moving forward. Introduce a new character, perhaps one that is not clearly good or evil, for the reader to wonder about. Insert a natural disaster, an attack, or an invasion. If you are writing in a modern-day setting, the attack can be a verbal one or some kind of fight. Have your protagonist injure themselves, have the villain make an appearance, write scenes in which a side-character becomes more prominent and begins acting mysteriously, reveal a secret about the protagonist's past. Just do something, or you will get bored with your writing, and when a writer is bored, the reader can tell. Stave off boredom at all cost by introducing the unexpected.

Although it can be tedious, plotting out your entire novel from beginning to end is also a great way to keep yourself on track. You can do this in several ways. First, write a summary. Try reading the jackets of a few books in your room to see what I mean. It should only be a few sentences that clearly state the main conflict of the book, introduce the protagonist, and leave you interested. You can choose to include your ending, or not. Then, use that paragraph to write a synopsis. You can even use this synopsis later to submit your novel to a publisher! A synopsis should be one page, single spaced, and outline all the scenes you want in your book. You don't have to finish your summary right away if some of the spots in your novel seem unclear. This is only the planning stage. You can add to or delete from this summary later. However, it will outline the spots that you need to focus on so that you can smooth them out.

These summaries are always written in the PRESENT TENSE. For example, my summary for The Second Sister begins: Eleanor Sandleford is thrown into a volatile situation when her father, Lord Roland, marries Lady Kingsclere. Although her new stepmother appears friendly, Ellie notices tension between her two stepsisters, Luciana and Belladonna.

You get the idea.

If you can't be bothered to write a summary when you get stuck, try doing an outline instead. Just use some bullet points to list scenes and characters that are important in your novel. You can organize this outline any way you like, and no one has to see it but you. Just make sure that you can understand what you mean when you go back and read it later. (I admit that I have occasionally referenced plot ideas in these quick outlines that I later forgot).

The most important thing to do is keep writing. Even if you feel like you're at a boring part, keep writing! You can always delete or brush up that part later if it seems sluggish or lugubrious. Just keep pushing forward, and eventually you will get to a more interesting part.

Saturday, May 29, 2010

Writing Demons

The Writing Demons have gotten ahold of me.

This is wonderful and frightening news, because I have been battling severe writer's block for the past few weeks. Oh, I got some words down, but they weren't heartfelt or engaging. When I scrapped the novel I had been working on (Mirror, Mirror) and started the novel I really wanted to write (The Witch's Daughter) by pulling out some old material from a folder on my hard drive, I unleashed a monster.

I spent all of last night writing like a maniac and got 10,000 words out all at once before collapsing into bed for a few hours of fitful sleep. I was busy most of today, but the writing demons haven't left. I'm exhausted. All my body wants to do is sleep, but my brain is still racing with ideas for my new novel. It is fitting in place perfectly with its two predecessors, The Second Sister and Wolf's Eyes.

I suppose I should make an important point about writing or something instead of just rambling about my late night. Remember: Write what you love. Even if you think no one else will like it. Even if you're in the middle of a novel you hate but feel obligated to finish. If it's not working, either change the novel so you fall in love with it again, or write a new one. Holly Lisle, one of my favorite novelists, says that writing is like stripping naked and dancing on the rooftops. I tend to agree with her. You are baring little bits of your intimate soul for anyone who chooses to pick up your book. But it's worth it. It's so totally worth it.

Friday, May 28, 2010

Knowing When To Stop

So, 23,000 words in to my third novel in 'The Second Sister' trilogy, I'm stuck.

Not just writer's block stuck. No, I can deal with that. Emotionally stuck. I just don't care about the novel I'm writing, and I'm only writing it because I want to tie up all the loose ends from the first two books in the series. So I have decided to scrap it. Now, this doesn't mean I'm deleting everything I've written. Deleting 23,000 words is a very bad idea. I might be able to use some of that material later, especially the romance scenes. But I'm not going to finish this book.

I always encourage my writer friends to finish the projects they start, especially friends that have trouble getting past the middle of their novels. But sometimes you just have to know when to quit. Writing is supposed to be about joy, discoveries, and emotions. When you are empty of joy, when you make no new discoveries, and when your only emotions are frustration and anger... it's time to work on something else.

So instead of writing the book about Snow White that I thought I would write, I'm going to write a version of Rapunzel with a new cast instead. I already have about 7,000 words from a few years ago that I really enjoyed working on, and I'll use that as my jumping off point. Remember my advice about saving everything? Follow it. You never know when you'll use it again.

Wish me luck, I'll need it.

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Slated for Review

Well, I got my confirmation letter. My novel is officially slated for review. I freaked out when I first saw the e-mail in my inbox. My stomach was doing somersaults and my head was spinning, but I eventually clicked the e-mail (after a full 60 seconds of panic-mode).

Thank God for girlfriends. Seriously, if you are not emotionally and physically healthy, if you are having any other problems in your life, do NOT submit a novel for publication. It wreaks havoc on your emotions. Make sure you have a solid, strong support system in place before even attempting to get published.

Cheers.

The Second Sister Query

To the Admirable Editors at Bold Strokes:

I am seeking to publish my fantasy romance novel, The Second Sister, which is complete at 76,000 words. The sequel, Wolf’s Eyes, is also complete. As per your guidelines, a synopsis, a brief biography, a formatted version of this query, and the manuscript are enclosed.

The Second Sister is a fresh, exciting retelling of the traditional Cinderella story. Although there are a few nods to the original Brothers Grimm and French versions, The Second Sister has a unique plot with several dark twists to the conventional fairytale.

In a kingdom where magic is feared, the orphaned Ellie is put to work by her sadistic elder stepsister, Luciana, and cheated out of her inheritance. With the help of a talking cat, a cook, two servants, and her beautiful second stepsister, Belladonna, Ellie must stop Luciana from using an ancient sorcerer's chain to bewitch Prince Brendan and take over the Kingdom of Seria.

I have been writing for several years, and during the past two, I have chosen to share my work online. The Second Sister has received awards from its hosting websites, ranking number one at The Athenaeum when it was originally published, and remaining on the weekly Top 25 lists for over twenty weeks. It also received a high slot on the Top 25 of 2009 list. Thank you very much for your consideration of this proposal.

Sincerely,

Rae D. Magdon
Today on May 26th, 2010, at 12:36 AM, I submitted my first novel, my baby, to Bold Strokes. For the moment, it's out of my hands. I should probably be proud - my girlfriend is being proud for me - but I am mostly terrified. Terrified of all the people that will read my work and judge it (and me).

But I sent it in anyway.

Here are some tips I have for those of you who are thinking about submitting a novel to a publishing company.

1. Select your publishing company carefully. Of course, I am writing for a niche market, so it is easier for me to choose who I want to publish my book.

2. Read their guidelines thoroughly. Research the submission guidelines. Find out where to address or e-mail your manuscript. Find out if they want a synopsis or not. Find out the names of the editors if possible. Do your research! Most of the information is online and easy to access.

3. If your novel has not been edited, edit it. Have someone else edit it. Then someone else. But if you want to publish it, DO NOT READ the novel for a thousandth time before you send it in. You will inevitably find at least one sentence you are not happy with and talk yourself out of it, convinced that in just another month (read: another year) you will be able to write the entire thing "better".

4. Do not submit first thing before you go to bed... you will not be able to fall asleep. Trust me.

Tuesday, May 25, 2010

Gathering Courage

Well, here I am. On the verge of doing something monumental - if not for the world, at least for me.

I have always been a writer. Ever since I was a little kid, I scribbled in my mother's left over 70 page journals and those marble composition notebooks at school. When I got older, I started typing out stories on the computer. At 17, I published my first novel online: look up my name (Rae D. Magdon) on www.xenafiction.net or www.academyofbards.com.

And now... it is time.

My goal: To publish my first novel - The Second Sister.

In case you are interested, here's the summary:

In a kingdom where magic is feared, the orphaned Ellie is put to work by her sadistic elder stepsister, Luciana, and is cheated out of her inheritance. With the help of a talking cat, a horse, a stableman, a cook, two servants, and especially her beautiful second stepsister, Belladonna, Ellie must stop Luciana from using an ancient sorcerer's chain to bewitch Prince Brendan and take over the Kingdom of Seria. You have never seen a Cinderella story this sexy before...

My target: Bold Strokes. One of my favorite publishing companies of all time, and extremely lesbian friendly.

In time, I hope that this blog will become something of a guide for other authors who are following the same treacherous, but rewarding path to publication. But now, in this moment, it's just a place to get my feelings out. I'm nervous as hell. My hands are shaking, and I'm scared just at the thought of sending my baby in to be judged by nameless, faceless people on the internet.

I can do this. I just have to keep telling myself that. I can do this... right?